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ZiggyMike
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« on: June 28, 2012, 18:37:38 »

His sandals sunk into the ground as he sprinted on the lush vegetation. The sound of each stride was like a hundred men marching into battle. The bearer of the superb golden sandals sprinted along the long stretch of space with tall trees and beautiful shrubs by his sides. Far away, the horizon was stretched and endless, with radiant clouds and a searing sun which appeared close and greatly brilliant. His exquisitely white clothing draped smoothly and flew backwards against the extreme gust of his phenomenal race.
The graceful being raced on and far off was a cliff which marked the end of the beautiful scenario and the beginning of a large gulf which seemed continuous with the horizon. He unleashed a blade strapped tightly to his waist and held it forward as he ran, picking up pace as he did. His face was most lovely and radiant and his white flowing robe was bordered with golden stripes which glittered in the eccentric brilliance of the eerie sun. His countenance was incensed and stern and he accelerated on looking sternly ahead. His gaze was fixed on a shadowy figure several paces ahead. The obscure being slithered along the grassy path leaving behind a singed serpentine trail. The sun was directly in front of them as they stringed the heated pursuit, which was running out of land as the big cliff stared daringly at them.
   “Stop!” the graceful being barked in a deep commanding tone.
The serpent creature let out a shrilled maniacal cackle and continued the race, accelerating hard to evade the gritty fellow who trailed strongly behind.
   “Stop now! Filthy coward.” he shouted, increasing his speed to regain lost space.
The windy animal stopped which made the fierce looking being stop too. He pointed the glittering blade at the big serpentine figure which was at least fifteen feet long. It heaved its upper half off the ground and slithered towards the young male who had chased him for long. Its dark scaly skin was adorned with abstract impressions which literally burned with a bright…….. and so on

This is the prologue of my new book “The Light” its available in Amazon if you follow this link http://www.amazon.com/dp/B008F2RKMG
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« Reply #1 on: June 28, 2012, 22:01:01 »

Hi,
My first impression was a vortex trip you totally rememberd.
Alas, its not to be. The question, would you enter a vortex for this?
Dare I ask, did you?
Nice.....
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« Reply #1 on: June 28, 2012, 22:01:01 »

logoVisit the website of Astral Pulse creator Adrian Cooper.

Home of the best selling book Our Ultimate Reality.

Astral Projection, Metaphysics and many other subjects.

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« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2012, 12:56:32 »

Where is the book review? Or is this excerpt something aim at the Writers Corner Forum? Or a commercial?
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