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Show posts MenuQuote from: CaCoDeMoNQuoteThis sentence can be compared to rococo or baroque artists point of view. Many paintings were done only to show how good the artist is, without any higher meaning or message.
Saying that a style of narration isn't everything is a very inaccurate comment.
But for what is such painting good for?
There are more important things than narration(of course some level of skill at narration IS required). What would ANY book be without interesting plot or characters or hidden meaning, etc. ? With nothing more than good narration book can only become a demonstration of author's talent, and such demonstration is worthless to the readers. Sometimes even in excellent books narration doesn't have to be good at all, for an example Joseph Conrad's "Heart Of Darkness" or George Orwell's "Animal Farm" and many others.
Quote from: CaCoDeMoNQuoteIt is not, but anyway tell me where I said anything about style? Style is nearly okay here(only word "feces" should be used instedad of "s h i t"),but style(type of narration, etc.) is not everything. It won't help if the book contains obscenities like the ones I've mentioned. I don't know if in US it's the same, but in Poland most people get offended/disgusted by things like "penis doorknobs".
Quote from: CaCoDeMoNQuoteOf course there are books that have higher meaning(like Franz Kafka's "The Trial" - in my opinion the best book about metaphysics), but what could be meaning of a book with meat monsters, rooms filling up with feces, and doorknob penises? I wonder why you responded to healthy criticism with attack and you are defending this story with such aggression? I guess that you are the author....
Well guess what, it isn't a humor story. If you thought such... let's just end with my saying that I greatly pity you. Literature isn't written for laughs or jokes (mostly), it is written to portray an idea or series of said. If you think that everything written has to be humorous then I wouldn't recommend reading the majority of literature out there.
I must admit that the ideas that I saw so far in this story look like they were created by 10 year old child, and author's(your?) writing talent won't help if you won't have more self criticism.
Or maybe it's a current writing trend in US? I guess that my taste is a bit outdated then.
Quote from: CaCoDeMoNIf the rest is as pointless and disgusting as the prologue then reading it is a waste of time. Whoever wrote this has a problem with his sense of humor:
(from the prologue:)QuoteIf this was meant to be funny... well, it isn't, it's just pathetic.
I reached for the knob at the same moment it began to melt and transform, turning pink and finally taking the shape of a flaccid penis. It flopped softly against the door, like a man was cramming it through the knobhole from the other side.
I turned back to John and said, "that door cannot be opened."
Quote from: Souljah333Surprised no one has mentioned the "Blue Apples"!?!
If you're interested in this subject, the emerald tablet, alchemy, etc. I think you might find this site very satisfying.
http://site.williamhenry.net/index.php?option=com_content&task=blogsection&id=6&Itemid=30
Quote from: CaCoDeMoNHeh... as someone who analyzes things to discover their purpace I find number one both ignorant and amusingQuoteI've summoned a few demons, and have reliable info on them, but this is not a thread about that, PM me for info.
also I actually don't know much about demons and would like to hear
your stories about them. please post if you know anything about it.QuoteThere are two possibilities:
thank you. what I said was made up I just wanted to see
how all of you would react. it's fun for me to ask absurd questions and get anwsers to analyze your behaviors.
1. This thread was a joke - I think that some moderator should ban you. Analyzing behaviors? People are like a tools for you then...
2. You really were recruited - you will become a tool of some entity - have fun!