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Astral Energy 3
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« on: September 02, 2004, 22:05:09 »

could use some work on a few of the rhymes but overall its really cool Cheesy thanks i like reading songs/peoms and stuff ^__^

"In a timeless world,
Were shooting stars fall,
There is never dull,
Watch and you shall see,
There is something there,
For all to learn,
Nothing gained has no beauty,
But is it duty"
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« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2004, 00:12:08 »

I like reading other people's work...

I agree with what mazdaaf said...

A few of the rhymes need work, but it's a very good start!


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« Reply #1 on: October 02, 2004, 00:12:08 »

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« Reply #2 on: September 02, 2004, 04:46:26 »


Laying in bed
the dizzness hurting my head
Cant take the buzzing
its surprising
My body stilled
I think Im killed
Im floating out
I cant come out
im stuck between
whats unseen
i move my hand
It comes out

I start to float
out my throat
I see my body
like its somebody
Im feeling afraid
but im not scared

I movee beyond my bedroom window
i see my Neighbor Mr. Findow
Im floating now as you can see
further out to where i have not seen

Im in a place where love is found
I see this is wheree my heart is bound
Im going further deeper deepper
i know this place is a keeper

I see two beings one white and gold
the other green but the other color untold
They say there my Guides from the otherside
Can i beleive them, Or should i backaside
The beings start speaking
i can't understand there talking
I left them while i kept walking
i know there here to help me be
I just cant see why there after me

I find my self back in my room
I start going down to my cacoon
slowly slowly i start to sink
slowly slowly while remembering my trip

I wake up at noon
why did it have to end so soon
was it real or was it  dreamed
this mystery will never be seen
that was the day i OBED
« Reply #3 on: October 14, 2004, 06:03:11 »

its cool  rolleyes
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