Urgent ** This Truth Must Be [post pointless poetry here]

[G!]

Today, and always, I awake to the nightmare of slavery.
Daily the violence against our spirits exists, and I don't feel that anything else in the Universe cares.
A Revolution must occur.
This, change must happen, everywhere starving Earth, will the suffering ever stop.
I am hopeful, but I need everyone else to be there.
What will happen if we don't drastically alter our lives.
I foresee much Universe, and there is a God, but why.
Exercise, Willpower, are these the true methods of our time, the Time we actually live.
To Survive may be Humanity's last way, the only way we may see what Life is for.
God Bless we say, but where is God.
God Damn, for my revenge, I feel the pain you are.
The Truth, my Revenge will be fulfilled in the eyes of God.
God Damn my God, for still I See.
I am lost, who is there out there. Where are the adults, THE ADULTS>
Nothing can cure my Hate. God
My Love, where did it disappear to after the countless rapes of my Soul.
You can sympathize, but will you Help
I am Glen, the last understanding of the Universe, you are with all I am.
Curse it all, if not True, then Death
All I know, all I am, is now for you.
My Soul, my loneliness, Heaven will not stop me. I NEED>
FOREVER FOREVER I CRY GOD GOD
Dragon me,
Enter me Satan, I am not afraid
People need my life
I am more than this, but I can
Help HELP my Africans are dying
Are you there, my people, the universe, are you there?
I promise to my love that I will never give up

MY LOVE GOD GOD I AM GOD I AM
For I demand IT
The  machine  curse the industry Damn the spice  I will not allow you anyone to hurt me again.
Maybe Earth can survive, perhaps, BUT WHY SHOULD WE?
DO YOU WANT TO SURVIVE OR DIE
NO MORE
HOW HOW CAN I SOLVE THIS
faith

i am tortured inside, no more lies
you astral pulsers, stop evil, destroy it
all that is false, we will destroy.

As whole I am, I need reason
my love forgive me, I will die this life
my children will die,
my love forever i will love you  Lee Ann  Poet  Kim
mind evolve me more, most till all my truth is
I'll never enter Heaven, Bless me please, We are One

Response?
Revolution
Love

I am witness to god
I am glen
grace

To Hope, hopa, I Love You, I'll forever care about you. I'm a slave, suffering, and i don't know if i can hold on to this verse, this ultimate.

I'll always be there for you   Poet   wherever you are, i'll find you
God help us, save, for why do we exist.
You can help, pray for hope, there is.
Distance....  ....    .... .  . .    .. . . .      . .  .. ........ .          ................... <.


Maybe this'll work, maybe Saiyan for sure, energy   POWER
POWER PYSCHIC POWER

God be with you all, for it is Truth,  
I LOVE make love to you
Transendance is the key, known our whole inter relation
Find a Trinity for youself,
Destroy evil, and save your souls.

Clax Sive

Start the revolution everywhere, it is our only hope,
Have faith in God     and be Free

I am

[G!]

Now an Image

[G!]

WHATS WRONG!!!1
GOT NOTHING TO SAY!!!!!
COWARDS!!!!!    

[Hannah b]

G!...I think most are speechless.....just like I am

[James S]

Umm...yeah.
What Hannah said - speechless.

[Stevo]

Personally this looks like a poem about the conditions in Africa. Sorry to say but, what do you reply to a post of such nature? I don't know any good poetry on the matter.

If anything I'd rather not directly reply because it also seems a bit overly self-boasting. I'm not one to get mixed up in ego.

"My Love, where did it disappear to after the countless rapes of my Soul. "

"I am Glen, the last understanding of the Universe, you are with all I am. "

"My Soul, my loneliness, Heaven will not stop me."

"MY LOVE GOD GOD I AM GOD I AM "

"I am witness to god "

[FuggleHop]

So, if you were to reformat that poem (?) to abide by the rules of haiku, how would you write it?

[IequalMC2]

(=X=)

!Checkmate!

!King On King!

Bread Reflects DDS Eliminating Eight, Cameras Lie, Fire
South up North imitating its nature reminds me; Wake me UP to See Snakes
Behavior, Fortunately Unarmed with the Jaw of an butt
A single Wave, Of the Deadly Stick Saber Pass

Freely Gives Comeuppance All Eyes Sight, Here
24 Elders Prey UP A Scroll Disappears
Two Birds one Sword Splitting Child Throne N
Thought Solomon's Temple, Sparks Incense Fires up
Arrows Airs Thought Smack the Snake,
Change through the Wire Dragon Baptized

The Swan
The Lake
Stick...Eternal Fire  

Head on the Plate lost, Fight Fire with
Fire, think about that, Restores Faith
!EZ!
Free Falling through the Wire
Gravitates
Light a Freak of Nature  
Retired A,
Quit the Wizard of OZ Behavior
Hear Catch The LightSaber

(=X=)

[Nay]

Ma-a-a-n.... This isn't going to be another one of those, you are gonna die in three days and come back as an animal, is it??  

I'm still feeling ripped off from the last one!  I was suppose to be a Panther!   Oh cruel fate, why do you mock me?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

[halfphased]

Cleaning cleansing bear sways the furious banter of expatriated eagle gullies.

Singing lullabies to the fickle manor inside existing he is
but self expectingly  crucially inspecting thee
from the knee down to toe top

wild bison bore down on the flexed finger of overbearance
the crevece wept

To them it is the time of raven feathers and roach legs
for me the fasting comes and the singing takes away mind's spirit nature

Two pencils and one sharpened
a box half empty
filling to be full
Crow knows he who cowers is she who nurtures cowardice

Green pistacios glitter in the poison of my dripped blood
smeared and splattered
grandma smiles
we walk the two step dancing our ways into the dark where the sun shines finally.

[James S]

Wow! Deep!!

[Giselle]

And the point is what??

[Stevo]

The black colourless darkness...
Darkness is a black hole
That blackens out
The dark darkness of my heart.
Darkness makes a colourless nest
In my darkened mind
And all I see is darkness...

*Sounds of many snapping fingers*

[James S]

Ok, has everyone gotten their little bits of pointless poetry out of their systems?

Coz if this topic doesn't get to some kind of point real soon I'm going to kill it off.

James.

[FuggleHop]

Sir, I haven't yet had a chance to post any of my poetry.

[James S]

Oi vei!!!

Ok, ok...

Purveyors of prominent prose,
Please produce, proffer or paste
Preferrably passable poetry,
Post-haste!

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[IequalMC2]

Its Triple Edged

I'll sing maybe we can get a river flowing, but I kinda gave up yesterday, so maybe not.  

lovey Words ALL!

[Ybom]

Oh, on a black lagoon teardrops in stride;
wash away my tears, honey!
For without the pearly glow of the moon;
send me off to another world, baby!
Suffering today in the wretched curse;
clean my wretched soul, dear!
Stricken in dusty deserted souless cities;
take me to a better place, my love!
Painful caresses wherever we are;
cry me a river so deep, soulmate.

[Nay]

Have you ever thought when a hearse went by
That you'd be the next to die?
They cover you up in a big white sheet
and bury you under six feet deep.
The worms crawl  in the worms crawl out
the worms play pinochle on your snout.
The air's alright for about a week,
then your cough begins to leak.
Then the puss rolls out like whipping cream

but ya ain't got no spoon....

Sorry, that's all I got except for, there once was a man from Nantucket

Nay

[IequalMC2]

(=X=)

*Finger Mouse Clicks*

Light Breaths recollect, On of the worst days yet
Yesterdays abyss hells keep always the mist
Sink with the oil, fingers move think yet to feel, Another Souls
Broken Soil, Hard ground earth does appeal

Letting Choke vibrant words emote pain
Deep in the Rivers moat, Tears of Light Intercept
Thoughts begun worthless notes
Another sigh giving up getting by
For nothing but to cry Dripping
Words without Expression across an Astral Sky    

(=X=)

[Nay]

I weep in sorrow
as the night draws narrow
shall I give of all my marrow?

Giving of my life,
do people understand their strife?
I hope they do, for I will give my life,
for one last toss of the dice.
If only to make it right.

............hey, that was nice.

Nay

[Selski]

Pointlessness

Indigo cuckoos call in
Sherbet Lemon Trees

In fields of Corn
Behemoth sleeps waiting...

Dreams of the half moon that
Stabs the night sky, guilt-stricken

Boatmen mumble incessantly
Of Shameless waves, sirens
White horses gallop
Across eyelashes
Turning all to dust
Which slips between my fingers
Effortlessly

[halfphased]

They call me marble mouth
because the truth comes out
in unpredictable bouts.

lol

in other words it is an attempt at automatic writing which has its hits and misses.  Misses more often than not  until I look back at it about a year later and see the gold glittering up through a murky stream.

[wantsumrice]

Sure, why not, I'll post a love poem  

Farewell

Thy words eclipse loves light,
Conjuring the darkness through the night-
Setting my suns of reveries
Once shining in my eyes that seized
The happiness of our days
We spent before parting ways,
But now the spell is broken.
Reality shall take its token.
Clouding the moon in the night
To awake ghosts that shall incite
The emptiness felt in my chest
The beating of my heart arrest,
But as the cocks shall crow
Dawn shall come and show
The spell unbroken only outspoken
By thy words that eclipse loves light.

PS:  Nay, get on msn We have much catching up to do!

[Nay]

Hehehehe..I tried the other night.. PM me with your address again.

Nice poem!

Nay