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cassiel kiani

hi people!..so yeah I'm gonna put up some of my poems..most of them result from my dreams...any comments criticisms are welcome =p

SEE YOU IN THE LIGHT
Fifteen days another moon, it will be soon
Until then I shall wait, for your presence to bloom
Would you decide or just deny, make up your mind
The darkness unwinds your blue eyes
In the cold night, the wind gently sighs

How can you see so far beneath the world?
Because I only see you in the darkness of the morning
Because I only see you in the depths of the sun
I only see you in the light

Searching for you far away, away from me, my soul astray
You're a hundred steps close but really so far
Picture of death, painting of hours
Forbidden rose and fruits of hearts

How can you see so far beneath the world?
Because I only see you in the darkness of the morning
Because I only see you in the depths of the sun
I only see you in the light

Few steps close, still so far out
Life of meaningless wandering
Days of lost pondering
Release me and let me catch a glimpse
For I believe that you're there and here

How can you see so far beneath the world?
Because I only see you in the darkness of the morning
Because I only see you in the depths of the sun
I only see you in the light

I only see you in the light
You are there in the light
I am going to find you in the light
Because I see you in the light

cassiel kiani

BACK AGAIN
Seconds pass, days would wander far
But no one realized the truth of life
I see them gathered around the cathedral, waiting
Praying for a new life to begin
Time repeats itself
Life wanders and wanders and back again
Look what happened .here we are
Right where we started, back again

Darkness is rising
Life binds itself around me
Protective as ever, never to break free
Blinded by this vision of paradise people have created
Secrets in your heart never revealed
Playing on your nerves, all the notes sealed
Look what happened, here we are
Right where we started, back again

Seven days ago another seven days and so
On and on it leads a never ending dream
Until one day you fire up and fight it all
The search begins and the heart opens
Long pondering nights, you're clueless
Told you not to give up but you gave up anyway
Look what happened here we are
Right where we started, back again

You fall back and surrender to life
Yet the question still remains
Have you see all there was to see?
Did you find that far away reality?
So what are you going to do now?
O"lords man
Because here we are
Right where we started, back again

Fourthdimension

I like your poetry it has a kinda of fantasy ethos and i like it. i dont know why i think that.
its too late here to give proper feedbac i ll have a proper read in the morning lol cause a just finished work and am really tired lol.

but you should post more poetry its good to read personal writings and creativeness

take care
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