The Astral Pulse

The Astral Library => Welcome to Writers Corner! => Topic started by: Synergy on May 25, 2006, 17:18:33

Title: Entity
Post by: Synergy on May 25, 2006, 17:18:33
Entity

Once I dreamt the rarest dream
Where mortal cares grew dim
I knew not more than was that world
T'was a dream of me and him

We played among the oceans vast
And climbed the mountains high
Flew among the falcon's flight
And touched the crystal sky

Two trembling hearts had beat as one
Two souls so thick entwined
Where love so pure and rare existed
As the only energy of it's kind

As one we were the light of stars,
The beams from forth the moon,
The source of life in all that world,
...Yet I awoke too soon.

* * *

Things yet unsaid, things yet undone
A fraught heart in despair
For chances lost the waking cost
Was more than it could bear

By morning's dawn two shaking hands
Held clasped upon a weary head
Tried not to let the wet of tears
Descend upon an empty bed

And with the coming of each night
In the dark a desperate plea
That when sleep would enrapture
He'd be once again with me

But only passes bitter time
And in the dark a haunting face
For once I had the rarest dream...
I long now for that place.
Title: Entity
Post by: MisterJingo on May 25, 2006, 17:27:59
I enjoyed that, thank you :smile:.
Title: Entity
Post by: Selski on May 26, 2006, 04:40:26
That's great, very moving.

Thanks for sharing.

Sarah
Title: Re: Entity
Post by: Raith on July 15, 2006, 20:09:59
Cool or more of amazing the perfect thing I need when I finished work and about to go to bed  :-D.

Thanks
Title: Re: Entity
Post by: psychonaut on January 13, 2007, 04:28:57
Excellent expression! the feelings you convey are put in motion well.

also, after reading the fourth line, and substituted the entity formally known as "him" to a certain special she, i was semi-amazed at how i could relate to it as i finished the poem.  :lol: