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Title: Poem of worlds
Post by: Varner-LaPrade on September 16, 2004, 09:23:19
I'm posting a poem I wrote I'm wandering if anyone likes it

The Woods of the Tree

The trees are tremendous,
yet they will fall.
I know how to escape,
yet I am doomed.

I can survive with nothing,
but what will I posses.
I continue to gather,
but I hold on to emptiness.

My lair emits a song,
so I hear the static.
I grow restless in fear,
so I live with anticipation.

I stagger the land,
for I have cleared the forest floor.
I wail at the trees,
for I am the cleric.

The trees are tremendous,
yet they will fall.
I know how to escape,
and I am doomed.

Ray Varner-LaPrade
Title: Poem of worlds
Post by: slernman on March 14, 2005, 11:07:55
'tis amazing!
Toll gemacht!
Title: Poem of worlds
Post by: Arie on March 30, 2005, 07:28:34
Good poem.  But why so sad?